Rabu, 30 April 2014

If I could go back in time


My Trip

Two weeks ago on Saturday 12th of April 2014 I returned to my hometown in the great city , my home along with my friends ride motorcycles . He picked me up at the lodging house where I live now. I am very happy at the moment , because I will meet with the mother , father , brother , and all my family .

I set off at 1 pm , on my trip two times pausing for lunch and refuel. When in the course I 'm looking to meet with the family at home . On the way to my house so far is also very hot and tiring . The reason I go home for holidays no hour lecture courses and other reasons since there is a wedding ceremony in my house my uncle , my father's sister . Of the three hour trip ended up me and my friend was at home at 4 pm , the trip was very tiring but enjoyable at the same time . Arriving home I immediately shook hands with everyone who is in my house , I felt very happy as to meet with them . I am about to rest because of fatigue on the way . After about an hour resting my mother called me to the shower , I was immediately rushed bath . After I had finished bathing accompanied by my father and brother .

Dusk arrived , me and my immediate family , although not together afternoon prayer . At 8 pm I sleep from exhaustion , I slept with my sister in one room . Because he is the only one of my sister , so each would not want to go home I have to accompany him to sleep . After a few days I was at home , and two days turned out to be a miss college courses are held replicates midterm and I do not follow the retrial . I feel so sorry why I do not go back to the metro yesterday .
After I heard the information from one of my friends , I immediately rushed to the metro on the following day . I am so sorry why I did not join the free test  with friends one class , if only time could in turn I'm not going to waste the time .


Finally , I am facing the lecturer and can still thank God for supplementary exams . I feel very happy although my own exams on that day . That's my thoughts on a few weeks ago .

Sabtu, 19 April 2014

The description of narrative text and to differ from other genres
1.   Narrative Text is text that focus on specific subjects, both fact and fiction, which is associated with an incidence of interesting (entertaining). Narrative Text only intended as an explanatory events that occurred in the past.
2.  Narrative and Genre introduces students to two key concepts in Media Studies, complementing Image and Representation published in 1998. The book covers the major narrative theorists and is illustrated with numerous case studies including The X-Files, Wuthering Heights, Se7en, and newspaper.
How to make a narrative text
1.   Determine the main character (the main characters). The main character in the form of an animal or human can be customizable.
§  Example: for orange color
2.  Determine the setting time and place (setting time and place).
§  Example: for blue color
3.  Define the problem to be faced by the main character (complication). Problems encountered can be more than one problem.
§  Example: for red color
4.   Determine the settlement of the problem facing the main character (resolution).
§  Example: for green color


An Experience with a Police in The Morning
My friend Sandi has a bad experience with the police in this city. Last month, he would return a flash disk to his friend’s house which located in Way Halim, Lampung. He borrowed his friend’s motorcycle which stayed in the same boarding house in Jalan Ratu. He departed about 6.30 am and he wore a helmet and a jacket. He drove fast to arrive soon; in one of the interchange, He saw that there was a police wanted to stop him by giving a code that commanded him to stop the motorcycle. He was so surprised, but He could control himself fast. He drove the motorcycle passed the left side of a car. The police couldn’t see and couldn’t stop him. He predicted that the police wanted to stop him because his speed has impinged the level of speed. He drove it slowly and He chosen the left side of the road to prove that he was a good driver.
A few minutes later, there was a police drove motorcycle beside him and He didn’t fell disturbed. He continued driving and didn’t heed the police. Suddenly, that police commanded him to stop and wanted to bring the motorcycle to the office. He didn’t know what makes the police did it. He said that He didn’t break the rule. He drove slowly and didn’t impinge the level of speed. He also explained that He absolutely chosen the left side. The police explained that Sandi used a muffler racing and the police of Bandar Lampung have declared that there is no muffler racing in this city because it can disturb the society. Sandi didn’t know the rule and He asked the police to forgive him and let him go. He just wanted to return his friend’s flash disk and that’s not his own motorcycle. He forced to go but police took the key and commanded him to come to the police office.
Finally, he obeyed and he was rode by that police. When they arrived in the police office, Sandi was explained that there was a rule that his friend’s motorcycle didn’t attend to use in this city and he was asked to take the driving license and the motorcycle license. He phoned his girlfriend to take it from his boarding house. When He had gotten the license, police gave him two choices; He wanted to let the motorcycle was brought and He should to take it at January 5, 2011 or paid the money Rp 160.000 as the replacing of the motorcycle. He didn’t want both of choice because the motorcycle was his own friend and he didn’t has money to pay it. He only had Rp 30.000 and He showed his pocket to the police. Actually He had much money in his pocket. He hidden into his other pocket when He was rode by the police. The police didn’t want to allow him to go because he had to pay it or left the motorcycle.
Sandi told to the police that He had an uncle who worked as a police in the Jakarta. Sandi showed the number and He asked the police to talk with his uncle. That police looked scare and he didn’t want to receive the phone from Sandi’s uncle. On the other hand, that police continued to do his job and didn’t care Sandi for a minute. Sandi knew that the police was scare and He tried to use this situation well. He told to the police that his uncle was a police from central headquarter of Indonesian Police Republic in Jakarta. That police was increasingly scare and He hidden his expression by wanted to continue his job to manage the traffic. That police said that Sandi had to pay it or went from police office. Sandi continued to force the police by that intimidation.
Few minutes later, Sandi’s uncle that lived in Jakarta suddenly came to that location. His uncle talked that He was in holiday and accidentally He saw him there. Sandi explained to his uncle why He was there. His uncle met the police and that police was feeling ashamed because Sandi’s uncle was his boss when worked in Lampung. So, with ashamed face, the police gave the motorcycle and apologized to Sandi and his uncle.  

Rewrite narrative writing, and show or underline the topic sentence on your writing
From example of number 2

My friend Sandi has a bad experience with the police in this city. Last month, he would return a flash disk to his friend’s house which located in Way Halim, Lampung. He borrowed his friend’s motorcycle which stayed in the same boarding house in Jalan Ratu. He departed about 6.30 am and he wore a helmet and a jacket.He drove fast to arrive soon; in one of the interchange, He saw that there was a police wanted to stop him by giving a code that commanded him to stop the motorcycle. He was so surprised, but He could control himself fast. He drove the motorcycle passed the left side of a car. The police couldn’t see and couldn’t stop him. He predicted that the police wanted to stop him because his speed has impinged the level of speed. He drove it slowly and He chosen the left side of the road to prove that he was a good driver.

Why the sentence is called as the topic sentence?

because the sentence determines the direction of the storyline that will be discussed in the next paragraph, so called the topic sentence.




Senin, 07 April 2014

Themes = > Experiences


My Experiences

My name heny Afrida yanti . I am currently continuing study at UMM . I studied from 2012 to date . I have many friends there , who always supported me . Before I entered college , I had studied at SMA Muhammadiyah Kotaagung . I have a lot of experience when I learned Senior in high school . When sitting in second grade , I was trusted by friends and homeroom classes to become a secretary . In high school I also got a lot of experience and lessons learned . I have also taken the scout movement since first grade , and a lot of stories and experiences . Since I follow the scouts I feel more mature and independent . In many scouts were taught how to shape the personality , how to become self-sufficient children , how to not feel embarrassed when in public , and others . When it was my lot to follow the race when I was on the scout . I am very happy because when it could always get together with friends, there is always advised , and a lot of that support . I have also taken up camp in the open field that is so far away from residential areas , there I actually taught to be independent and be yourself . Until now I always remember the advice given by the senior brothers , teachers and most importantly my parents . That's a bit of my experience when I was in high school .