How
to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion :
1. Paragraph using the
main idea that is expressed in the topic sentence
2. Each paragraph has
a topic sentence and the other is an explanatory sentence, and using three the
mind the explanatory paragraph (main
idea). Function paragraph, namely:
a) Written with the express idea of giving a shape to your thoughts and feelings in a series of sentences that are
logically arranged, in a union;
b) Marks the transition (the turn), a new idea for a bouquet that consists of several
paragraphs change (change of mind);
3. Ease of understanding for the reader;
4. Facilitate development of essay topics into units smaller units of thought,
and
5. Facilitate the control of variable composition consisting mainly of several
variables.
Cohesion is interdepartmental relations in the text marked use of language elements.
Cohesion concept basically refers to the relationship form, meaning that the
elements of discourse (word or phrase) that is used to construct a coherent discourse
has linkages and intact.
The differences between coherence and cohesion :
Coherence
Coherence A coherent
paragfraf said, if
there is cohesiveness between the ideas presented sentences to each other. The sentences have a mutual
relationship and together discuss one main
idea. Not found
a single sentence that deviates from the main
idea or leaps distracting.
Cohesion
Cohesion If the coherence associated
with the content, the cohesion or
coherency forms relating to
the use of his words. It could be one of the
main ideas put forward a
paragraph, but not necessarily
cohesive paragraphs that say if the words are not coherent.
Show which text or sentence that shows adequate or inadequate
cohesion on your paragraph by underlining or putting in the table.
coherence
The book is an investment in the future.
The book is a window that science can open up a person. Compared instructional audiovisual
media, books are better able to develop creativity and imagination of children as
it makes the brain more active associate symbols with meanings. Radio is a
medium of electronic tools that many people heard. Nevertheless, interest and ability
to read something about not grow automatically, but must go through training and
habituation. Creating a generation of literati requires a process and a means conducive.
Cohesion
In 1997, rice production fell 3.85 percent.
Increased rice imports, estimated to be 3.1 tons in 1998. achieved self-sufficiency
in 1984, in 1985, we exported 371.3 thousand tons of rice, even 530.7 thousand tons
in 1993. in 1994, we come up short rice trade balance of 400 thousand tons. And
increased rice imports in 1997 reached 2.5 million tons.
why
your text or sentence that you underline is categorized into cohesion. Coherence
The above paragraph is said to be coherent
because there is one sentence that deviated from its main idea sentence in bold.
Cohesion
The above paragraph suggests a
main idea, namely
the issue of the rise and fall of Indonesia's rice production. Thus the coherence of the
sentence are met, but the paragraph is said not
to have good cohesiveness
that the elusive
idea.
