How to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion :

1. Paragraph using the main idea that is expressed in the topic sentence

2. Each paragraph has a topic sentence and the other is an explanatory sentence, and using three the mind the explanatory paragraph  (main idea). Function paragraph, namely:

a)    Written with the express idea of ​​giving a shape to your thoughts and feelings in a series of sentences that are logically arranged, in a union;

b)   Marks the transition (the turn), a new idea for a bouquet that consists of several paragraphs change (change of mind);

3. Ease of understanding for the reader;

4. Facilitate development of essay topics into units smaller units of thought, and

5. Facilitate the control of variable composition consisting mainly of several variables.

          Cohesion is interdepartmental relations in the text marked use of language elements. Cohesion concept basically refers to the relationship form, meaning that the elements of discourse (word or phrase) that is used to construct a coherent discourse has linkages and intact.

The differences between coherence and cohesion :

Coherence

Coherence A coherent paragfraf said, if there is cohesiveness between the ideas presented sentences to each other. The sentences have a mutual relationship and together discuss one main idea. Not found a single sentence that deviates from the main idea or leaps distracting.

Cohesion

Cohesion If the coherence associated with the content, the cohesion or coherency forms relating to the use of his words. It could be one of the main ideas put forward a paragraph, but not necessarily cohesive paragraphs that say if the words are not coherent.

Show which text or sentence that shows adequate or inadequate cohesion on your paragraph by underlining or putting in the table.

coherence

The book is an investment in the future. The book is a window that science can open up a person. Compared instructional audiovisual media, books are better able to develop creativity and imagination of children as it makes the brain more active associate symbols with meanings. Radio is a medium of electronic tools that many people heard. Nevertheless, interest and ability to read something about not grow automatically, but must go through training and habituation. Creating a generation of literati requires a process and a means conducive.

Cohesion

In 1997, rice production fell 3.85 percent. Increased rice imports, estimated to be 3.1 tons in 1998. achieved self-sufficiency in 1984, in 1985, we exported 371.3 thousand tons of rice, even 530.7 thousand tons in 1993. in 1994, we come up short rice trade balance of 400 thousand tons. And increased rice imports in 1997 reached 2.5 million tons.

why your text or sentence that you underline is categorized into cohesion. Coherence

The above paragraph is said to be coherent because there is one sentence that deviated from its main idea sentence in bold.

Cohesion

The above paragraph suggests a main idea, namely the issue of the rise and fall of Indonesia's rice production. Thus the coherence of the sentence are met, but the paragraph is said not to have good cohesiveness that the elusive idea.